Sunday 24 November 2013

Writing Term 4


I am learning to: Describe a sea creature from the story Commotion in the Ocean.

What I need is: 
Describing words
What the animal is
What the animal looks like
What the animal does

Turtle

I am the turtle.  I have baby turtles and I live in the ocean. I am green and I live on the beach.

Zoe

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